
THE GRACE OF GOD
Some accidents are just waiting to happen ...
Introduction
I was watching a TV news report
about a motoring hit & run incident. Someone had been killed, and
someone had got away with it. So far. One of the things that struck me
was the demonization of the "cowardly, low-life, scumbag" driver who'd
fled the scene; the way that he was automatically held totally responsible
simply because he hadn't stuck around to face the music.
And there's got to be music,
hasn't there? As a culture we tend to absolve the dead from any
responsibility for their actions. Instead, we go gunning for the living.
The softer target. And then we hammer them, a lot harder than they
deserve.
Of course, sometimes the living
do deserve everything they get. But the fact is, we all
drive badly some of the time, and some of us drive badly pretty much all
the the time. I've had my own share of incidents, and have made my
contribution to the motoring mayhem we've all become used to. Buy, by
the grace of God, and occasionally through the caution and fast
reactions of others, I've so far managed not to hurt anyone.
Well, not physically anyway.
The really amazing thing is that
we have so few accidents, relatively speaking. We routinely miss
each other by seconds, or just fractions of a second. It's normal
driving behaviour. Just stand at a busy roundabout and see for yourself.
A second is often all there is
between life and death.
But what if an otherwise decent,
honourable, reasonable driver happened to take his eyes of the road for
just those few vital seconds - meaning the wrong few seconds - and
happened to kill a man; a man who, for instance, just happened to be the
most accident prone man in his county? And what if the driver
recognised, or at least sincerely believed, that no possible good
could come from holding his hand up? What if such a man stood to lose
more than his standing in the community and his liberty? What if there
were others in the firing line who would also suffer? How might such a
man handle that situation? How might anyone handle that? And would he be
right? And would he be wrong?
I guess I was trying to make
some kind of important social point. But I'm not sure that I achieved
it. Life is more complicated than that. And "important" fiction is a
tricky animal that's hard to hold down.
Anyway, that's where this tale
comes from. I threw in some other ingredients and created half a dozen
characters, all with their own agendas. I tried to resolve it all
without having a "cop-out" ending, and then I sent it to half a dozen or
so literary agents and submissions editors.
I can't remember getting a lot
of positive feedback on it, but nothing really damning either. It just wasn't what
anyone wanted. I might try it again if I come across a literary agent or
submissions editor specialising in road traffic accident novels. But the
chances are, my characters will live and die on the hard drive of my
computer.
Which is a shame, because for a
brief spell I thought I had something there. But I've made that mistake
many times before, and expect to get it wrong again.
GROUNDSPEED
140,000 words
Plot:
It started started as a motoring accident ... that became a
hit and run ... that turned into blackmail ... that
degenerated into a campaign by a ruthless news editor to
generate sales. At all costs. And at
anyone's
cost ...
Chapter One
When Peter Archer
left his home on that otherwise perfectly ordinary,
perfectly unremarkable August morning, he had no idea he was
going to kill a man.
But at
11.52am that’s exactly what he did.
The man he
killed was Clarence Anthony Wisley. It was a sudden, violent, and messy
death which, over the next two weeks, would tragically alter the course
of many lives.
It could
have been so easily avoided.
But
ultimately so could everything.
It was now
Monday. Day one of that momentous fortnight. As usual, Peter Archer
awoke at 6.15am precisely. And, also as usual, he glanced across the bed
at his wife who was gazing back at him.
He raised
his eyebrows.
‘Ready?’
‘Whenever
you are, lover.’
It was a
new game with them. A challenge. Could he be dressed and ready for work
before she had the breakfast on the table? Last week she’d beaten him
four times out of five. But this week it was going to be different. It
was going to be a bloodbath.
‘Say the
word,’ he said, gripping the edge of the bedcovers and sliding a leg
from under the sheet.
‘The word,’
she said, stealing a one-second lead.
They
scrambled out of their respective sides; she making a dash for her
dressing gown; he making a dash for the shower. Still wearing his
pyjamas, he stepped into the cubicle. Turned the water on with one hand.
Grabbed the shampoo bottle with the other.
A master
stroke.
‘Cheat!’
was the last thing she said as she made for the stairs.
‘Sue me!’
he called back, now washing his hair with one hand whilst undressing
with the other. Fifteen seconds later he was naked. Twenty seconds after
that he was soap-sudded from head to toe and squirting shaving cream on
his face. He reached for his razor. It was cunningly wedged in the
curtain rail.
By the time
the smell of frying bacon wafted up the stairs, he was finished with the
shower, was finished with the shave and was sprinting back into the
bedroom. He was still dripping and ahead by a full minute and thirty-one
seconds.
She’s good,
he told himself as he towelled himself dry. But I’m better. Oh
so much better ...
Within two
minutes he’d put on underwear, shirt and trousers. The secret with the
shirt, he’d worked out just last night, was to fasten only every
other button. His tie would cover the rest and he could do the
remaining buttons up whilst driving to work.
Master
stroke number two.
‘One minute
to go, Peter!’
He knew all
about her demoralising tactics and ignored her. Instead, he fastened his
cufflinks. No strain on the brain. One twist on the wrist ...
He looked
for his shoes. Saw they were gone. Seconds later found them under the
bed.
‘Bitch,’ he
muttered, as he resurrected them.
Still, just
wait until she tries to find the coffee jar ...
He was
wearing his slip-on shoes this week. That saved at least twenty seconds
(he’d timed it during practice on Sunday afternoon). He’d also
pre-loaded his jacket pockets the night before with the usual items;
fountain pen, wallet, diary, handkerchief, car and factory keys, the
bare minimum of loose change and his wafer-thin calculator.
Was there
no end to his deviousness?
He hurried
over to the mirror and fastened his tie as he checked himself for fresh
wrinkles and fluff. Twelve seconds later he was finished (down four
seconds from last Friday). He started combing his thick black hair,
raking it back and slightly to the left, and as he did he caught a
distinct whiff of instant coffee coming up the stairs.
She
pre-loaded the bloody cups,
he told himself. The sly cow ...
Laughing,
he quickly finished with his hair, threw the comb down, grabbed his
jacket and hurried to the bedroom door. Then he remembered his watch.
The rules were very specific. The breakfast had to be properly
made, and he had to be properly dressed.
The watch
was on the dresser. He picked it up. But as ever, he was unable to put
it on without glancing at the inscription his wife had put there.
With love,
it read simply.
Brief and
to the point.
Typical.
Smiling, he
slipped it on, stepped over the bed, grabbed his suit jacket and made
for the stairs.
‘And don’t
forget your teeth,’ came a voice from below. ‘I’ll check ...’
He stopped
sharply. Cursed. Darted back to the bathroom. He squeezed some
toothpaste on his index finger. Wiped it across his teeth. Spat it out.
Rinsed. Decided that would fool her.
Six seconds
lost.
Half a
minute later he was downstairs and walking calmly into the kitchen. He
strode over to the cooker. Gave her a toothpaste-fragrant kiss on the
mouth and squeezed her left buttock. He saw to his delight that she
hadn’t even started on the eggs.
‘Need some
help?’ he asked.
‘Bastard,’
she whispered.
Feeling
smug he sat down at the table, aware that she was glancing round to see
that he really was dressed. He patted his jacket pocket on each side.
Fully loaded, his expression said.
She looked
away disgusted.
It was
6.44am precisely.
*
Aged
thirty-eight, Peter Archer was the proprietor and managing director of a
Bradford-based engineering company. The firm specialised in
architectural and domestic structures and fabrications; products that
included spiral staircases, door handles, letter box flaps and
surrounds, door knockers — and pretty much anything else that turned a
precious penny in a highly competitive marketplace.
Archer
Fabrications had been started in 1947 by Peter’s grandfather. During the
second world war, Samuel Archer had been in corvettes — mostly on the
North Atlantic runs. But he was an engineer by trade before the shooting
started and had decided that when it was over he was going to be one
again.
If he
survived.
Demobbed in
1946, Samuel Archer saved carefully for two years, borrowed £200 from
his father and bought some second hand engineering equipment and rented
a workshop in Bradford. The first year he made a small profit. The next
year he made a large one. He bought a lease on a larger premises and
took on two apprentices.
And so it
went from there.
When he
died in 1975, the company was formally inherited by Peter’s father,
Howard — who had been the de facto head of the firm for five
years previously. And in 1997, when Howard Archer collapsed and died of
a heart-attack — the company, together with all its successes, problems
and responsibilities passed to sons Peter and David.
‘And I
don’t bloody-well want it,’ David had said. He was a law student at the
time and had his sights set on what he’d once described as more
fundamental problems than mashing metal about. ‘All that oil and grease
and noise. It’s not for me.’
‘Fine,’
said Peter. ‘I’ll buy you out then.’
‘Buy?’
David, his older brother by almost two years, had shaken his head. ‘It’s
yours, little brother. Lock, stock and barrel.’
It was an
untypically generous offer. But Peter had nevertheless insisted that he
should pay something for the firm and finally it was agreed that
Peter would take over the company as sole proprietor, and David would
acquire the other assets left by their father which included the old
house, his father’s car, some stocks and bonds, and a small sailing
yacht kept at
Whitby.
At the time
it was hard to say who got the better deal. But later they agreed that
they both had, albeit for totally different reasons.
Peter and
David Archer had perfectly normal, perfectly unremarkable upbringings.
The house was a medium sized semi built on the west side of Bradford
long before the city became one of the biggest Asian communities in
Britain. In the neighbourhood in which the boys grew up, there weren’t
any Asian families. It wasn’t until Peter came to London that he learned
that coexistence with ‘the wogs’ wasn’t nearly as problematic as his
father had sometimes opined.
Their
mother, who came from east
London,
had never been happy in Yorkshire and preferred London. Consequently,
the boys had spent almost as much time down south as up north and had
picked up some of the best and worst qualities of both regions.
When their
mother died in 1986, the maternal family connections, such as they were,
dissolved and that side of their lives faded into history.
After
college, with brother David studying law at Cambridge, Peter, who had
been living in digs in London, had gone straight back to Yorkshire to
work for his father. He’d really wanted a career in ... well, in
something else. He was never sure what exactly.
Just
something a little more exciting.
Dynamic.
He was
twenty one at the time of his return. Even so, Peter Archer had started
on the factory floor doing fairly menial things. Sweeping up. Cleaning
the swarf from the machinery. Carting away the big bins for the scrap
van. Making the tea. Sharpening the drills and cutting tools.
Occasionally lending an extra pair of hands on some complex fabrication
—plus all the other things expected of the cabin boy (as he was called
at the time).
As a
teenager he’d learned many of the basic engineering skills, but had
never really had what his father called ‘an engineer’s feel’ which, like
perfect pitch, was apparently something you either had or you hadn’t.
And he
hadn’t.
‘You’ll get
no special privileges here,’ his father had warned him on the day he
officially started. Howard Archer, a bold as brass Yorkshireman who,
like his father, ran the company like a naval warship, had never
had much regard for namby-pamby colleges and universities—not when a
good, honest apprenticeship could teach a boy all he needed to know, and
teach him in the real world. A world of men. And sweat. And
graft. ‘You’ll start at the bottom and work your way up, son.’
‘Or down,’
interjected a dry-humoured, but (then) good-natured Jack Ramsden, the
works' pipe-and-slipper foreman who’d been with the company since it was
founded. ‘But it’s good to have you on board anyway, lad.’ He’d smiled
and had pointed across the room. ‘There’s the broom. And there’s the
kettle. Mine’s the brown mug. See you at eleven, okay?’
Archer
Fabrications currently employed eleven staff. Eight on the floor and
three in the office—and two in the grave, as the old factory joke ran (a
joke that referred to the two preceding captains of the ship whose
influence throughout the company was still felt, especially by the older
members of the crew).
In its
heyday (the late fifties and early sixties) the company had employed
forty one men on the floor and eight in the office. But those days were
long gone, largely through increasingly aggressive competition from the
far east. By the time Peter Archer was at the helm they were taking on
plenty of water and weren’t expected to make it to port.
However,
against all dire predictions (notably among the older crew members
again), Peter had been a fairly shrewd businessman and had made some
unpopular, but necessary decisions. He’d sold off or mothballed a lot of
the old, ‘tried and trusted’ equipment—the Cincinnatis, the Churchills,
the Bridgeports and the Harrisons—and had invested heavily in modern
German and Italian plant.
He’d also
retired a few old hands whose enthusiasm for the firm had waned to the
point where they were, on average, showing up for work only three days
in every five and were becoming increasingly creative with the time
clock.
Then he’d
sacked Brenda in accounts, ostensibly for incompetence, but secretly
because he knew—but couldn’t prove—that she’d been operating a few small
but ingenious financial scams that couldn’t be overlooked any longer.
There weren’t the margins for embezzlement anymore.
Besides, it
wasn’t right.
The day
after he sacked her, his car was vandalised. Someone took a pair of
heavy cutters to the bodywork, punched holes through every body panel
and slashed the tyres. Then they’d smashed the offside front window and
urinated on the driver’s seat. Knowing exactly where the cowardly attack
had come from (but unable to prove it) Archer had promptly sacked
Brenda’s boyfriend, Sid, who worked in the welding shop, and had dared
Sid to take the matter to the bloody employment tribunal if he wanted.
Meanwhile, he would be taking the video film from the outside security
camera to the local police and they’d take it from there.
‘That
camera’s been fucked for years, ya bastard,’ said Sid, uncertainly.
‘Think so?’
bluffed a nervous Peter (Sid being a big guy with huge, engineer’s
hands). ‘Well I had it fixed last week for the insurance company and we
can find out in court whether or not I’m lying.’
The matter
never went to court, and Peter Archer’s car had been left untouched ever
since.
After that
episode, much of the hostility—at least the open
hostility—dissolved. But it was still there. Simmering. In order to
consolidate his authority, Archer knew that he also needed to find
contracts. And so he had immediately gone out on the road to visit a few
old clients whose files had been gathering dust and cobwebs, and had
fortuitously come back four days later with three firm orders; orders
enough to keep the factory in work for the next year. He’d taken on
another member of staff to replace Sid, and then had taken on a
youngster to demonstrate that the company was in a viable condition.
As a
confidence booster, it was a shrewd manoeuvre.
Some would
say devious.
During
his college years, he'd read up heavily on modern business methods and
quickly refreshed himself. He sold off a lot of the old steel stock and
disposed of various other assets, including three outlying parcels of
derelict land and two of the company’s four trucks.
He then
implemented a new and fairer wage structure, had taken a cut in his own
salary, and had even picked up a broom again and had shown that he was
prepared to muck in with the rest of them when necessary.
‘You’re
nothing like your father,’ Jack Ramsden had told him one morning when
they were stood side by side loading an urgent order onto a waiting
artic.
‘Is that
good or bad?’ Peter Archer had asked, pausing to wipe the sweat from his
forehead and re-roll his shirtsleeves.
‘I’ll let
you know,’ Ramsden had mumbled, looking away.
But nothing
had been said since; which, for Ramsden, a Yorkshireman himself
with a ready tongue for things that displeased him, was nothing less
than outright approval.
Peter
Archer made one of his increasingly frequent visits to the bank at
around that time and fought hard to have the company loans restructured.
He drafted a new (and shrewd) business plan and had shown that the huge
debts the firm had accumulated could be turned around in just two
fiscals.
‘Well, it
all looks good on paper,’ the bank manager had agreed. ‘But it’s not our
policy to carry firms who fail to move with the times.’
‘Move
production to the far east, you mean?’
It was an
old bone of contention. Both his father and grandfather had fought tooth
and nail to keep the firm in Bradford even when the accountants advised
relocating into more ‘economically appropriate’ labour markets.
‘Not
necessarily that far,’ his bank manager had replied, lounging in
his chair and wiping his glasses. ‘Poland and the Czech Republic has
plenty of surplus capacity, and sooner or later they’ll be in the EEC.
It might not be a bad idea to get in now before the Germans get it all.’
Peter had
refused.
Archer
Fabrications was a Yorkshire firm. A firm that helped keep the local
economy alive. Firms like his were important, he believed. Yes, it meant
hard times now. But the Asian tiger economies were in trouble,
and he wasn’t convinced that the EEC was as ready as it claimed it was
to expand membership. True, there were plenty of carrots dangling on the
stick. But it was a long stick, and wasn’t getting any shorter.
Therefore, he wanted to stay local and, as his father would say, stick
to his guns.
‘Well it
won’t help anyone if you go bust and leave a gaping bloody hole for any
foreigner to plug,’ said his bank manager.
‘That’s not
going to happen,’ Archer had insisted. ‘There are always new contracts
out there. It’s just a matter of getting the right man to win them.’
‘And that’s
yourself, is it?’
‘I think
so.’
And so the
loans had been restructured and the overdraft increased.
But that
was then, and this was now, and at that moment Peter Archer was in his
car headed west toward the offices of Thompson, Miller and Stephenson
(Engineers) Ltd, an old client based near Sleaford, Lincolnshire.
Thompson, Miller and Stephenson had been doing plenty of restructuring
of their own over the past five or six years and were only now beginning
to emerge from a cloud of grave financial uncertainty.
Peter
Archer had telephoned Sarah Parker, his personal secretary, at around
9.15am and explained that he was now in Lincolnshire and would call
again after the meeting was over.
There were
four messages for him, Sarah said.
The bank
wanted him to call by the close of business today.
Check.
The
printers had prepared the new letterheads and business cards and would
be sending samples for his approval.
Check.
Jack
Ramsden said that there was a problem with the surface grinder, which
meant the Percival job would be delayed another day.
Check (and
shit!).
And the job
centre phoned to ask if the vacancy for a trainee had been successfully
filled.
No it
hadn’t.
‘Anything
else?’ he asked, speaking via his hands-free kit and keeping, as ever,
within the speed limit.
He knew
that he wasn’t a particularly good driver and had long since decided to
stay well within his limitations.
‘No, that’s
it. Oh yes. Except that you asked me to remind you to pick up something
for your wife’s birthday.’
He didn’t
need reminding about that. Angela was thirty-five on Thursday. He’d been
planning a special meal in an expensive restaurant and was looking for
some little gift for her. Something unusual. Imaginative. But simple.
‘Thanks,
Sarah,’ he said, ‘I haven’t forgotten.’
Then he’d
disconnected.
And
presently he went into the meeting at the company’s offices and came
away with a definite ‘maybe’.
It was about fifteen
minutes after that that he killed the man named Clarence Anthony Wisley.
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